queenyuffie

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OCs at the beach. ^_^

Edited: I fixed the image. I tried fixing the background as well, but I do not know how a pixel background would work, though...

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Ownerqueenyuffie
CoownersN/A
BoardTira
ProgramPaintBBS
Size700x600
Added22:05, 25 Jun 2009
Modified20:13, 26 Jun 2009
Time summary5h 55m 45s
Version10/10
StatusFinished
(09:03, 26 Jun 2009)

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Are we too close to the shore? by queenyuffie
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  1. darcio - 09:16, 26 Jun 2009
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  3. Jasmine - 09:27, 26 Jun 2009
  4. Sanra - 09:30, 26 Jun 2009
  5. Sakura28 - 11:17, 26 Jun 2009
  6. -Katrina- - 11:32, 26 Jun 2009
  7. Atashi - 12:29, 26 Jun 2009
  8. hoh - 19:31, 26 Jun 2009
  9. Graga_G - 20:12, 26 Jun 2009
  10. Hokori - 20:26, 26 Jun 2009

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Are we too close to the shore? by queenyuffie

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cml

cml

read notes to see why i dropped this pic
#1 cml - 09:50, 26 Jun 2009
faux0pas

faux0pas

I like the first plan, but you should make sea with pixels as well : c
#2 faux0pas - 13:15, 26 Jun 2009
queenyuffie

queenyuffie

Thank you for noting me about that. I fixed the drawing- I removed the floating details and I fixed the lines. But I have a question: if I were to keep those floating details, how would I fix them? That was my only stuck point.
#3 queenyuffie - 20:13, 26 Jun 2009
cml

cml

try to add some shadows and other things that would probably put them on the ground :)
#4 cml - 20:18, 26 Jun 2009
queenyuffie

queenyuffie

Oh, I see! I had trouble on keeping the light direction the same when the characters were under the umbrella, but it was totally confusing when it was outside the shade (thus the floating details). Ah, thank you! I will keep that in mind when I plan to draw something such as that. :3
#5 queenyuffie - 20:26, 26 Jun 2009
Hokori

Hokori

Very nice shading;) But what the red lines on brown-haired girl's body are?
#6 Hokori - 20:39, 26 Jun 2009
queenyuffie

queenyuffie

The lines on her body are these markings she has had when she was a child. But it is not blood :)
#7 queenyuffie - 21:24, 26 Jun 2009
Hokori

Hokori

Uh-huh, so sth with her storyline, he?;> Hehe, naa.. I didnt think its blood;) It looks very interesting this way;D
#8 Hokori - 22:13, 26 Jun 2009
harunagisa

harunagisa

I love how you did the coloring and shadings :D Hm, yeah, I kinda agree with faux0pas.. if the background is pixels, this will be perfect! ^u^ I dunno how to do that though OTL
#9 harunagisa - 17:33, 10 Jul 2009