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kill

minor change.. the shirt really bugged me..
i should mirror my pics more often..

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Ownerkill
CoownersN/A
BoardLevel2
ProgramShi Painter
Size355x391
Added01:05, 16 Jul 2009
Modified21:39, 16 Jul 2009
Time summary3h 37m 6s
Version5/5
StatusFinished
(20:39, 16 Jul 2009)

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Smoking Kills by kill
v1 by kill
01:05, 16 Jul 2009
1h 6m 28s
Smoking Kills by kill
v2 by kill
13:44, 16 Jul 2009
1h 28m 33s
still work in progress.. i really don't...»
Smoking Kills by kill
v3 by kill
20:35, 16 Jul 2009
51m 49s
Done
Smoking Kills by kill
v4 by kill
21:33, 16 Jul 2009
8m 28s
edited for the sake of cml :3...»
Smoking Kills by kill
v5 by kill
21:38, 16 Jul 2009
1m 48s
minor change.. the shirt really bugged me.....»
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Comments9
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Promoted by:

  1. Seras - 09:33, 17 Jul 2009
  2. Devil - 16:58, 17 Jul 2009
  3. Olimanga - 15:17, 18 Jul 2009
  4. ashy - 22:11, 22 Jul 2009
  5. Mimiko - 20:30, 26 Jul 2009
  6. wela - 21:13, 1 Aug 2009

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Smoking Kills by kill - 01:05, 16 Jul 2009

Okay... I'm very unsure of the board-system here..
But Seras told me in the comment, that it would be level 2 - standard.

k edited for cml to reach the standards :3
+ i mirrored it, it looked better for me this way.. (i noticed that as i mirrored it to see the eyes better)

Comments

Seras

Seras

I think that if you finish this art you could put it on a level2...but first complete it :) I like this face :)
#1 Seras - 12:08, 16 Jul 2009
Devil

Devil

Nice :)
#2 Devil - 13:46, 16 Jul 2009
Olimanga

Olimanga

Wow, awesome *o*
#3 Olimanga - 14:14, 16 Jul 2009
Rahead

Rahead

really nice colours :) tho i think eyes are a bit uneven (left is to high) face looks cool but in my opinion is slightly too long.
there's something strange about his shoulders too... or maybe it's caused by the fact that i can't see his neck in this position :)

i realize it's a wip so good luck in finishing and i hope it was helpful <.<

and welcome here btw :D
#4 Rahead - 20:24, 16 Jul 2009 - Last changed: 20:24, 16 Jul 2009
sweeeeeeeety

sweeeeeeeety

wow!
awersome
I like his eyes
sorry for my english
#5 sweeeeeeeety - 20:43, 16 Jul 2009
cml

cml

please correct this two problems (see pic notes)
and then it could reach level2 board..
#6 cml - 21:17, 16 Jul 2009
kill

kill

@cml okay i fixed the two thing you pointed out,
but the "color" is actually the cigarette filter...
i extended it, now to the front. it looks a bit very long now, but okay..
#7 kill - 21:35, 16 Jul 2009
cml

cml

nice - thx :)
#8 cml - 22:38, 16 Jul 2009
supermanwich23

supermanwich23

The eyes looked better before. No real human face is symmetrical. In fact- in portraiture a likeness is obtained by measuring against ideal and unrealistic proportions those of your subject. I don't know why you were made to extend the cigarette filter... but I see no substantial difference.. and I'm glad I can still see version 3.. which, In my opinion has more character and personality.

Of course.. I'm just a "n00b" so what do I know? But I think I'm entitled to my opinion about it. Nice work, dude.
#9 supermanwich23 - 08:39, 28 Jul 2009 - Last changed: 08:39, 28 Jul 2009